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燈凜
我覺得第三、四章的篇幅，可以融合成一整章比較剛好，中間用「＊」之類的符號分節即可。
因為光看第三章，還不太懂里花跟正季是什麼關係。
8 months agoReply
南嶺笑笑生
感謝建議，小的要先研究怎麼用符號分段（這故事的其餘部分或許亦應該要大量加上符號分段）。
8 months agoReply
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