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Lura
才瓶第一篇…就來這麼猛的嗎？
我看這篇的時候整個大開眼界欸，因為我的小說風格是景物描寫配合譬喻讓整體看起來比較有深度且細膩，但你反而著重在對話，用對話營造氛圍，從約會前羞澀的說笑、毫不突兀的表白、循序漸進的親吻，一直到送禮物、分別，對話造就了這一切，而這並不是我熟悉的，卻是值得我學習的❤️

整體評價：S！
10 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
謝謝喜歡，其實我比較擅長對話，多謝評分呀！
10 months agoReply
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