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黑靈
幼瑤的法力高強，很帥氣！
9 months agoReply
红烟
御姐型幼瑶姐姐！也是典魂司的长老哦~(⁠ㆁ⁠ω⁠ㆁ⁠)
9 months agoReply
夢生
幸好不是晚上點開的小說xD
10 months agoReply
红烟
被嚇到了嗎wvee
10 months agoReply
夢生
@红烟,但是夠刺激！喜歡！xDDD
10 months agoReply
红烟
@夢生,哈哈哈，謝謝~😆
10 months agoReply
夢生
@红烟, （又膽小又愛看恐怖的me，已書籤慢慢看xD
10 months agoReply
红烟
@夢生,不會太恐怖的，請放心食用~(⁠≧⁠▽⁠≦⁠)
10 months agoReply
Yuki Selune
所以容魚是被關起來餓死的嗎？
10 months agoReply
红烟
yaaa，饿死了然后被烧掉Ó⁠╭⁠╮⁠Ò
10 months agoReply
剑寒舟
說起來 我讀到失去四肢的人偶娃娃 其實是個人對吧
1 year agoReply
红烟
是哦~四肢被拆掉惹……(✿◡‿◡)
1 year agoReply
剑寒舟
@红烟, 喔喔那麼你寫 人比較好 因為你寫到人偶娃娃 太出戲了 xD
1 year agoReply
红烟
@剑寒舟,話説是在第三章的嗎？（尋尋覓覓
1 year agoReply
剑寒舟
@红烟, 我記得看到好像第一章
1 year agoReply
红烟
@剑寒舟,改了~就叫人彘吧
1 year agoReply
剑寒舟
@红烟, 会好很多！ 因为这样比较合理 XD 我其实喜欢你目前故事悬疑 
1 year agoReply
剑寒舟
容雨好傷心！！

其實我很喜歡劇情，很有鋪張到懸疑和進展氣氛 文筆上也算不錯 只是節奏還在摸索著，已經非常不錯了！
1 year agoReply
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