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AnFr安鍅
評語：這篇好沉靜、好壓抑，但我超喜歡。沈然那句「我喜歡你，你信嗎」超有衝擊力，他不是在等一個答案，而是在等一個肯定——不是對「愛」，而是對他整個人。然後那句「因為你從來不讓人看透」真的讓人一刀捅進心口，兩個人像互相想靠近，卻又彼此設防，好痛好真實。最後那句「反正，時間這很長」，一整個心碎慢慢收起來，好絕望卻又帶點希望，好揪。
11 months agoReply
北斗八星
欸嘿嘿，謝謝姐姐喜歡！不過，不讓人看透內心，確實會讓人有種「不要太相信」的感覺，卻又想要靠近……
11 months agoReply
AnFr安鍅
@北斗八星,慢慢靠近~
11 months agoReply
茗那
✎﹏ 一點簡單的評語外送 ‧⁺ ⊹˚.

最喜歡這種淡淡甜，但越看嘴角飛越高的文了（？
「反正，時間還很長。」感覺兩人都是適合用時間默默磨感情的人，時間絕對夠沈然把人追回家對吧（置板凳
1 year agoReply
北斗八星
喜歡這種文～
是呀！
1 year agoReply
北斗八星
兩個男生～戀愛故事～我的最愛
1 year agoReply
月穎靈
感謝參加！很有韻味的結尾呢，讓人忍不住期待後續～
1 year agoReply
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