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珞玥
篇幅很飽滿，誠意十足 ʕ⁠ ⁠•⁠ᴥ⁠•⁠ʔ⁠，附註也很用心，能讓讀者瞭解到，接下來的故事，會如何呈現人稱代名詞的使用~

（小小建議，人物的內心戲或許可以用『』的方式，又或者以獨立一句的方式做呈現，可能會更便於讀者們閱讀哦~
10 months agoReply
劉姜入海
內心戲我是學冰與火的，可能可以獨立一句吧，我有空來全部修修，謝謝喔
10 months agoReply
黑靈
好奇一問，祈禮流雲是人，神，精靈，魔法師那一種？
10 months agoReply
劉姜入海
他其實就是人
他的種族名叫冠人，之後也會提到
10 months agoReply
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