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原子能
艾瑪這又是親又是咬的，宣示主權啊！
7 months agoReply
對酒當歌
她可是女主角呀XD
6 months agoReply
原子能

【村民沒宥舉行祭宴】錯字->村民沒"有"舉行祭宴。
【拿出點肉"亁"放到口中】錯字->拿出點肉"乾"放到口中。
【羞澀的樣子"把"比雙月還要奪目】贅字 -> 羞澀的樣子比雙月還要奪目。
【圓球生物"的"靠著不斷彈跳移動】贅字 -> 圓球生物靠著不斷彈跳移動。
7 months agoReply
對酒當歌
感謝指正~~
我較正兩次都沒看出來XD
6 months agoReply
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