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原子能
從槍戰切換到刀戰，戰鬥風格完全變了，寫得很細膩，那種刀刀見血的緊張感都出來了。
8 months agoReply
原子能

【我竟然被你這媽的人類】漏字=>我竟然被你這"他"媽的人類
【老鼠頭露  出獰笑】多出空白
【不知從那個洞口出現】錯字=>不知從"哪"個洞口出現
8 months agoReply
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