Honestly I started writing this at work and I still haven’t named the narrator (this is okay because Ellis is the actual protagonist and narrator of the full story I intend this to be part of) so I’m glad you think it’s well planned because… well, it was barely planned at all. If anything this is the rough plan for the real scene, should I ever write the full story. But that would require a little thing called ‘naming one of the main characters’ so who knows how that’s going to go.