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企鵝跳
嗯……感覺有些標點符號缺少和放錯了？
2 years agoReply
莉卡莉卡
標點符號缺少我懂，但放錯了是什麼意思？
2 years agoReply
企鵝跳
@莉卡莉卡,比如第一段應該是【説實話（，）旅途是真的很無聊。】

第三段：【嘉明整個人癱在沙發上抱怨（：）“我感覺我們這一趟白來了……”】

第四段：【説起來（，）子祥你和村民……】

每個‘說’的後面應該是（：），不是（；）
2 years agoReply
莉卡莉卡
@企鵝跳,看來我得惡補一下標點符號了（雖然應該還是不會好到哪里去）
2 years agoReply
企鵝跳
@莉卡莉卡, 我記得網上有很多簡單的説明，可以搜搜看www

加油加油！
2 years agoReply
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