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I really like the way you write Logan. His interactions with everyone help propel the story forward while also coming off as believable for his character. I can clearly visualize him.
Saurna
Thanks. Good to know you can picture him.
@Saurna, I would say out of all of the characters so far, you write him the strongest. At least, that's how I feel in my own personal opinion. His character just strikes me as interesting because of his dynamic. His personality comes off to me as having complex layers.
Saurna
@Jay Ellis, Wow, I was worried I didn't do him justice. I usually have difficulty writing male characters. They're either paper props or rubbish.
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