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Agsoki
Hello, I’ve just read the prologue and the three first chapters of your story and I have many things to say !First, it's totally the kind of story that I like and which is easy to get into. The fungus contamination kind of reminds me of a video game called “The last of us” but in your story we know a lot more about the outbreak and I find it fascinating. The prologue really made me want to read the story, as well as the title. However I was waiting for maybe more evocative scenes and descriptions of where the story takes place because it’s what makes a story immersive. But I was forgetting that it was only the prologue because I found what I was looking for in the first three chapters. In fact, the transformation of the soldiers in the hospital was remarkable and well-written, and from this moment I knew it was going to be a macabre story. Thanks to this mutation we understand how the virus is violent and the contamination hopeless and why the scientists absolutely need to find a key to fight it !Moreover I really liked the fact that the story is from the point of view of the scientists who discovered the fungus and how they try to find a solution to what they just created by exploring the cave without good enough protections. Finally the damage caused on the protagonists is really interesting and I hope it will still be developed in the next chapters.Thank you for your work !
Rosa&Anthony
Thank you for taking the time to read so far! I am forever grateful for your kind words; I honestly didn't think it would make some sort of connection to the Last of Us! But it is certainly entertaining to see the resemblance! Maybe I can do some sort of gory spin off to the franchise with our own twist? Haha, certainly a tempting idea!
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