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現代龍
直接把陸家駿的來歷和身分全部交代清楚，還有和皇兄的關係好壞，這樣循序漸進的描寫讓劇情比起以前版本更加圓潤清晰了，很可以👍
2 years agoReply
鈴鈴卷
也變的沒那麼慘了，基本上這次陸家駿是戰力天花板，和狼狽沒什麼關聯性🤣
2 years agoReply
現代龍
@鈴鈴卷,要好好讓讀者喜歡上男主😎
2 years agoReply
鈴鈴卷
@現代龍,希望可以
2 years agoReply
夏夏
恩~還真的是算到未來老婆呢www
2 years agoReply
鈴鈴卷
這就不知道是開玩笑的還是真的了🙈
2 years agoReply
青小豆
我學生時期讀的明明不是神書，可是也是一打開就頭痛欲裂，只差沒有自動跑進我腦袋裡了(???)
2 years agoReply
鈴鈴卷
尤其是英文課本，除了頭痛欲裂，考試考不好，手掌也會被鞭子打的痛不欲生
2 years agoReply
黑正
看書流鼻血……嗯，原來是那種書😳
2 years agoReply
鈴鈴卷
肯定不是你誤會的那種🙈
2 years agoReply
艾克黑曼
我記得我手上的是「公共版基礎〝吐〞納氣功」？而且書皮上有個類似館長的大裸男，有點不太蘇夫(難過到岔音)~~XDDD~~~
2 years agoReply
鈴鈴卷
吐納就是呼吸就能引氣，但這個世界觀是要靠礦晶〝納〞氣，不用吐🤣

至於大裸男就不用了🥶這可是教科書呢
2 years agoReply
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