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ItsAmelia
Wow. You weren't kidding when you said you went over the word limit. But this was great! I've never rethought humanity so much in my entire life. And the fact that this takes place over thousands of years just blows my mind. Great entry!
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I got my inspiration from a book called all tomorrows. It spans billions of years and is much more creative in their human evolution depictions.
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ItsAmelia
@Bengolong, that's going into my mental reading list.
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@ItsAmelia, Well in that case here's the entire book for free in pdf format http://marsh.speedrunwiki.com/Text/alltomorrows.pdf
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ItsAmelia
@Bengolong, Quick question: are you an artist?
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@ItsAmelia, No. I cant draw.
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ItsAmelia
@Bengolong, Dang it, of you were, it'd be great to see your human subspecies drawn out.
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@ItsAmelia, Someone else could always do it if they wanted. I wouldn't object. But yeah I physically cant draw. My hands will tremor during any fine movement such as drawing or moving the ice cube tray full of water to the freezer. I had a seizure that sort of scrambled my brains and ever since then my hands have shook.
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ItsAmelia
@Bengolong, Oh, I'm sorry. I'm glad you can still write though.
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@ItsAmelia, No my handwriting looks like shit. Like a 6 year old wrote it. Typing is all I got.
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ItsAmelia
@Bengolong, That reminds me of what my sister's going through right now. Her right arm twitches whenever she grips something and she's been in a lot of pain. She's 9 but her handwriting looks like my 5-year-old sister's handwriting. This had been happening since April, but the doctors think she might have a cyst in her shoulder which is messing with the nerves, causing the twitching. It'll shake so much when she grabs a pencil, and I hope she gets better before the school year starts.
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@ItsAmelia, I'm sure she wont be bullied for it. At that age I don't think kids focus on stuff like that.
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ItsAmelia
@Bengolong, They’re more concerned for her than anything. A lot of her friends just hope it’ll stop soon.
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@ItsAmelia, Yeah it probably wont just stop on its own.
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Eli
This is amazing!!!
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My inspiration is All tomorrows a billion year chronical. I'm glad you like it.
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Kaleb finn
I Think your a bit over the word limit 😝
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My name is Walter Hartwell White. I live at 308 Negra arroyo lane Albuquerque new Mexico 87104. And I don't care.
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Eli
@Bengolong, wow
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@Eli , That's my full name and address too you can look it up.
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Kaleb finn
@Bengolong, Hehehe im going to swat you Walter White🤣😂
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@Kaleb finn, https://youtu.be/HUZbxz4Pl_M
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Eli
@Bengolong, cant belive i didn't notice that
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Eli
@Bengolong,i fell ashamed of myself
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