I guess this could be described as horror, just not in the sense that many people might imagine. Regardless, it was a great and gruesome story. I liked that in the end Nilo was just being prepped to be eaten. The only thing I would say, is that I found a lot of typos, so it may be worth proofreading it again to revise those. Other than that, good story. I enjoyed it. :)
Yeah, you can thank mobile auto correct for those typos. Nonetheless, thanks for letting me know. Def will have to find out how to turn off auto correct.
@Jay Ellis, Yeah sounds just about right. Sums up my life in one sentence. I might be coming to you about an idea some friends and I are doing. Not precisely creepy, more of a guard rotational thing and logs and what not. Real life beats everything i read in books. As long as you don’t mind, that is.
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@Jay Ellis, @Aserilla1, thank you both.
BTW i enjoyed reading this ( dont take that the wrong way)