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水無月 楓
感謝回應！看反應我倒覺得來創挑的人更需要勇氣@@ 因為我要知道的是感覺！所以我以為反應會更好才是....
另，其實有件事我蠻疑惑的，就是分章的問題！
要是已經覺得悶/不夠吸引的內容，還連綿幾千字，感覺不會更痛苦嗎？
4 years agoReply
冥王星
如果你可以吊讀者的胃口就不會
4 years agoReply
水無月 楓
@冥王星,當年的我應該沒那麼心思細密🤐
4 years agoReply
冥王星
@水無月 楓,我以前學生時代在寫小說也沒有，可能真的跟年紀和經歷有關，現在我會較著重在角色的心境上，某方面讓角色的心境轉換推動劇情，才不會讓讀者有「看不懂為何角色會這麼做」的茫然，還有我個人會時不時穿插某角色的過去（雖不會講明但也足夠明顯能知道是誰），算是可以讓讀者理解前因後果，現在自己認為內容夠成熟後，才敢發表在網路上。
4 years agoReply
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