Your chapter was absolutely incredible! This scene is chaotic in the best way funny, sharp, and full of personality. The dialogue feels natural and the banter keeps the energy high, even as the stakes become clearer. Great balance of humor and tension. I’d like to talk with you about an idea I have, what do you think.
Your chapter was absolutely incredible! This scene is chaotic in the best way funny, sharp, and full of personality. The dialogue feels natural and the banter keeps the energy high, even as the stakes become clearer. Great balance of humor and tension. I’d like to talk with you about an idea I have, what do you think.