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石久
閱讀到這裡，其實心裡滿常難過的，雖然是紙片人但也領便當領的太隨意了TAT，普通人就跟炮灰一樣、執行職務不強的也死掉了。有時候我都在想...能不能他心裡對他的職務也是不願意的，偷偷放水之類的？
到後來就覺得其實這樣寫的角色有點扁平，炮灰就是炮灰無法對自己的生命奮鬥、團結、想辦法作戰？
雖然不是主角但也希望即便是再怎麼不起眼的小角色都想創造屬於自己的故事，我想每個紙片人都不想服務主角的生活存在吧！少發一點便當，不要只是出現三個要處理的屍體，也許這三個角色都會增加很精彩的故事呢~
3 months agoReply
七里浮香
謝謝你的意見，我會改進的
3 months agoReply
夏澄
拉拉不用上學應該很開心，該不會是故意忘記吧🤣
4 months agoReply
七里浮香
她是擔心哥哥，心不在焉。
4 months agoReply
夏澄
感覺皮耶是個大人物！

4 months agoReply
七里浮香
其實前面出現過了。
4 months agoReply
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