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語者
@醉染秧歌作者大大的文筆很好，節奏也很順暢，唯一的問題是字數太少了XDD

目前劇情正在鋪陳萌芽階段，但劇情設定是相當有潛力的，我看過這類型最大的問題就是"後面的腦洞不夠精彩"


目前劇情也還沒演到後面，但希望大大可以維持一樣水準，然後多搞一些腦洞伏筆

另外擔心的是角色量太少，因為重生作品很常聚焦主角過度，所以忽略了其他角色的描寫，其他人都變成了龍套。

另一種問題是讀者會很想看主角開掛，但如果限制太多，委屈太多，那會讓讀者很難受

這類型作品其實很多，但寫好很難，目前文本量不多，但我覺得大大很有潛力，慢慢把控是絕對沒問題的!!
9 months agoReply
醉染秧歌
謝謝您的稱讚，我會繼續努力，希望不會讓讀者們失望！
9 months agoReply
語者
小三開始看金庸，古文小case啦

作者寫的第一章就很有趣，算是目前看過古文裡寫得非常好的，晚點續看，只能說我感覺到無比的潛力哈哈
9 months agoReply
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