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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
感覺有點... ...因為作品名的關係，讀起來的內容跟自己想像有點落差，可能這是作者刻意製造的錯愕感覺，我沒有想到是父母與子女的關係。

當然故事主線可以是父女(因為第一次約會對他們的影響)，但作品名有需要提供線索，否則會令讀者誤解，無法投入故事。
5 years agoReply
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