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魅影
哇～非常感覺您能看完古玩店，還寫下如此豐富的心得喔！
字數和篇幅方面，我會想辦法加強，希望能使故事更有趣。
而角色方面，林立（另一名評論此故事的作者朋友）之前也有說過，感覺比較像NPC。這個我會仔細想想如何增加他們的戲份😆
另外，00章的場景描述方面，我會修改的。
總之，非常感謝您提供的意見😊
4 years agoReply
月隱飆塵
能夠對你有幫助就好~~作者加油~!!!
4 years agoReply
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