Yet I would've enjoy more details when Jason and Emily was about to make out, but I know it would've been quite against the flow and spirit of the story. Still, you did a great job like always :D
Yeah, like you said, it did pose a threat to the flow so I kept it short with an element of daring nature on Emily's part. Plus I wanted Janet to see them just in time too :))
@weirdguy96, I'm not talking about mature scenes lol, I don't read mature stories. When I'm talking about details, I'm referring to taste, scents for instance. I don't know if you understand where I'm aiming at.
Hehehe! Who's best? It's Vinnie! I guessed d*mn right here! This little moron of Emmett is Kelly's brother, well it's not surprising since they're both annoying little foxes.
Anyway, this chapter was great! Even though I know their moments of happiness will obviously be shorten by the wicked Kelly and her evil brother (Did I mention that I was allergic to them?), I couldn't help but let escape few "Awww" and smile as I read.
@weirdguy96, Well according to her reaction when she saw Janet, I think that Kelly's going to pretend to be amnesiac. Jason would have no choice but to stay with her 'cause - would you believe! - all she would be able to remember it's her days before she left college.
@Lavinia Scott, Oh my! You're pretty close, I must say. Very close indeed. But it's not as simple as that. I didn't really want to take the smile off your face but not much cute or happy scenes for a while. *Devilish grin*
@weirdguy96, Three or four? Are you insane? It's too long! No I'm just kidding. Okay then.Can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what's going on in Kelly's head.
@Lavinia Scott, You know very well that I'm not gonna spill the beans :P But someone's gonna die and that's for sure. The person could've been alive but died.
@weirdguy96, Hahaha XD "I thought of killing more than 2 people" this sentence made me laugh. I imagined you saying that out loud and you sounded like a bl**dy psycho.
No don't add any extra details of the kiss. Reading through it made me feel awkward. *innocent reader here*
Anyway, this chapter was great! Even though I know their moments of happiness will obviously be shorten by the wicked Kelly and her evil brother (Did I mention that I was allergic to them?), I couldn't help but let escape few "Awww" and smile as I read.
Allergic? Lol!
For a while? Till when? (chapters)
Yeah XD
Argh! Can I have some hints?
But someone's gonna die and that's for sure. The person could've been alive but died.
Someone important? Is it because of Kelly's scheming?
Well, thank you for this change of mind.