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aefadawsd

It's Emmett. I knew it! Kelly is a really good actress, I must say.

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

This is just a start. Kelly's real acting skills are yet to come :D

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

Yet I would've enjoy more details when Jason and Emily was about to make out, but I know it would've been quite against the flow and spirit of the story. Still, you did a great job like always :D

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

Yeah, like you said, it did pose a threat to the flow so I kept it short with an element of daring nature on Emily's part. Plus I wanted Janet to see them just in time too :))

9 years agoReply

@weirdguy96,
No don't add any extra details of the kiss. Reading through it made me feel awkward. *innocent reader here*

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@JellyKat, Don't worry, I won't. Innocent? I'll have to give that fact some thought :P

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, Again, you did a great job ;)

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, Could've gone on but I don't like including mature scenes in stories. PG-13 remember? :D

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, I'm not talking about mature scenes lol, I don't read mature stories. When I'm talking about details, I'm referring to taste, scents for instance. I don't know if you understand where I'm aiming at.

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, I understand. Actually, I wanted to leave you people wanting more :P Guess that trick obviously worked. Not on @JellyKat though...

9 years agoReply

@weirdguy96, Lol. Okay more or less innocent then. I don't write mature stuff and I don't read that shiz either.

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

Hehehe! Who's best? It's Vinnie! I guessed d*mn right here! This little moron of Emmett is Kelly's brother, well it's not surprising since they're both annoying little foxes.

Anyway, this chapter was great! Even though I know their moments of happiness will obviously be shorten by the wicked Kelly and her evil brother (Did I mention that I was allergic to them?), I couldn't help but let escape few "Awww" and smile as I read.

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

Alright, you guessed right. You got me. Moments of happiness eh? Well, you'll have to wait a bit for those moments :P :P
Allergic? Lol!

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

Guessing the outcome of this plan? Keep guessing :P :D

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, Well according to her reaction when she saw Janet, I think that Kelly's going to pretend to be amnesiac. Jason would have no choice but to stay with her 'cause - would you believe! - all she would be able to remember it's her days before she left college.

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, Oh my! You're pretty close, I must say. Very close indeed. But it's not as simple as that. I didn't really want to take the smile off your face but not much cute or happy scenes for a while. *Devilish grin*

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, Am I? Interesting.
For a while? Till when? (chapters)

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, Um, Idk, about three or four chapters?

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, The overall atmosphere will be darker and more gloomy.

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, Three or four? Are you insane? It's too long! No I'm just kidding. Okay then.Can't wait to read the next chapter and find out what's going on in Kelly's head.

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, Five chapters to be exact. There is an imminent (you know what) remember? :DD

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, what do you mean by darker and more gloomy? You're not planning on killing someone, are you?

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, Five? Well, I hope I'll be able to survive lol
Yeah XD

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, We all gotta die at some point, right *evil grin

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, You're...
Argh! Can I have some hints?

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, You know very well that I'm not gonna spill the beans :P
But someone's gonna die and that's for sure. The person could've been alive but died.

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, I know, I know but I just wanted to try.
Someone important? Is it because of Kelly's scheming?

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, Yes, because of Kelly's scheming. And yes, the person IS important. You would wish, "No matter what, the poor thing could have lived"

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, you're a heartless author, you know that?

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, Tee hee. I thought of killing more than two people but settled for only one in the end so you're actually lucky :P

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, Hahaha XD "I thought of killing more than 2 people" this sentence made me laugh. I imagined you saying that out loud and you sounded like a bl**dy psycho.

Well, thank you for this change of mind.

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, Don't really know if you'll feel sad or disturbed or upset. But you will feel something among that :P

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, Cold-hearted man.

9 years agoReply

weirdguy96

@Lavinia Scott, Sorry :P :P :P Wait and watch :P

9 years agoReply

Lavinia Scott

@weirdguy96, I hate you sometimes *glaring*