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凌步
非常感謝你仔細的心得與反饋，是很寶貴的意見，很有參考價值！

#7那邊，真的，我都沒發現，已經修了！謝謝你的提出。

節奏那邊我會再修看看，非常感謝你寫出如此完整的心得，讓我知道讀者在整個過程會有甚麼感覺。

再一次感謝你的閱讀，祝一切順利٩(ˊᗜˋ)و
6 months agoReply
嵐斕
(⁠ ⁠ꈍ⁠ᴗ⁠ꈍ⁠)b
6 months agoReply
嵐斕
@凌步
6 months agoReply
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