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竟然？？
這是給工程師看的小說嗎XDD

雖然但是，身為工程師我覺得還是太累了，我有注意作者前三章放慢，希望能慢慢介紹，但後面又跳太快了XDD 

然後在使用一些方式表現情感或場景時，GPT的多愁善感修復可以減少一點，因為這樣的小說比較類似一種創新設定流，比起GPT潤過的多愁善感形容詞，我覺得作者可以使用更多更直白的方式描述就好了，因為這類型小說，喜歡的就會喜歡，即使修辭隨隨便便，只要規則搞得好，戰鬥搞得有趣，基本上工程師會被吸引，非工程師不管怎樣都會bypass啦XDDD
9 months agoReply
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