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阿掌
無翼與寧靜的對話間有一段描述，「我對她的反應笑了出來」。

通常「對……感到……」的句式，後方應是形容詞，個人淺見是這邊可能要改成「我因她的反應笑了出來」或是「我對她的反應感到好笑」會比較通順。

大家都聚集到月球上了呢，感覺挺緊張的。
2 years agoReply
白牙
了解，已修改謝謝。

第一幕要開始了，演員到齊。
2 years agoReply
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