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晴空下的雨
謝謝妳的心得，也辛苦了。

然後我真的不是故意要刀QQ 

只是當時剛好拿了一篇創挑故事來改，所以就......

因為投稿比賽有字數限制的關係，所以確實沒有辦法再多給男主描述，不然我也覺得他有點存在感太低，而且也好想寫一些甜甜的畫面......❤️

妳的建議很棒，如果放上一些回憶確實應該可以更虐......咳！更甜！下個故事可以來嘗試一下XD
1 year agoReply
寒天七舞
好好笑 原來是創挑惹的禍( ；´Д｀)哪個創挑出來挨刀！

沒問題！也期待你下一個故事 或者變成長篇小說🥰🥰一點小心得跟建議供參考～
1 year agoReply
可鹹甜
也多謝波斯貓呢xd
1 year agoReply
寒天七舞
雖然不知道謝什麼 但還是不客氣（？
1 year agoReply
可鹹甜
@寒天七舞,假日加班寫心得啊～
1 year agoReply
可鹹甜
服務大眾～
1 year agoReply
寒天七舞
@可鹹甜,確實是加班寫心得好好笑🤣🤣🤣
1 year agoReply
寒天七舞
@晴空下的雨奉上心得～～讓你久等了❤️
1 year agoReply
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