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星羽
好吧, 没什麼的我看看有冇另一個故事在分享://
6 years agoReply
穹葉
謝謝參加！那個，我先說，我雖然按讚了，但「我不認為這是通關」的。當然這跟是不是同人無關，本創挑並沒有對此作限制。但我左思右想，還是決定不打賞，抱歉。

首先，我完全看不出來這是在同人什麼東西…………………（該不會是DC吧？？？但內文完全沒提到相關的東西，就冒出個「英雄」，但一堆東西都有英雄啊……）

請讓我說一個故事／我想說的是／請讓我一個一個說故事。我只想說，對不起你跳針嗎🤔？尤其第三句，請讓你一個一個說故事，我只想問，你難道不只一個你OAO？（驚）

無比美麗而甜蜜的愛情故事，好抽象，反正我不喜歡。希望有小夥伴喜歡。後面的私設我沒看懂用意何在……

我想問，作者的母語難道不是中文嗎？只有書名、坑、類型是真的敲出來的，內文字很大，標點不確實，語法詭異，看著都像複製的，讓我很不明所以OAO
6 years agoReply
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