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目前感覺每個章節都特別短，這是方便閱讀的，但目前感覺作者比較像是寫了大篇幅，然後每一千個字做一次裁剪，為什麼我會這麼說呢？

因為回歸分章節的主題，一部好看的影集、動畫，最重要的是讓你對下一集有所期待，目前看起來，章節的最後通常沒有安排什麼懸念、期待，也可能說爆點不夠大，這樣當我看完一個章節後，我對看下一個章節的慾望就不大

我認為作者可以試著把章節合併、字數多一點也沒關係，但每個章節的最後應該要鋪陳出懸念感
9 months agoReply
冬季貓貓蟲
感謝您的建議！我確實是一次寫了大篇幅，然後每一千裁一次，被抓包了！我再來想想怎麼修！


9 months agoReply
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