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溫水天荷
　　　主題走向（單看簡介）：愛情、校園類型。描述小說界的天才女主角因為叛逆離家出走，然而女主角到新地區後遇到個性也同樣惡劣的男主角。
　
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以比例表示整體　　旁白：７０％　　對話：３０％　　排版舒適度：７０％　　流暢度：８０％　　標點符號：７０％　　文字美感：７０％　　跳脫：ｎｏ　　深度：７０％　　完整性：７０％

優點：流暢度高，文筆偏輕小說。

吸引度：整體偏簡單輕鬆，處於觀望中。
1 year agoReply
餃餃餃ᴳᴺᴺ
好好笑 比她還惡劣的男主角哈哈哈哈

謝謝大佬的閱讀！！
1 year agoReply
溫水天荷
@餃餃餃ᴳᴺᴺ,不客氣。
1 year agoReply
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