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謎樣烏鴉
@王子
評文已經完成了，抱歉因為進度壓力和個人因素沒能看完全文，希望能對你的寫作有所幫助
評文連結：
https://www.penana.com/article/1122853

3 years agoReply
謎樣禿鷹
都具備啊...感覺會很有趣呢~。w。

收到!
5 years agoReply
王子
可能會令你失望呢......
5 years agoReply
謎樣禿鷹
@王子,　啊　不至於吧，頂多可能會混亂？能寫到４０５Ｋ的作者感覺都有一定功底的～～
5 years agoReply
王子
@謎樣禿鷹,劇情緩慢。
5 years agoReply
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