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謝謝倉鼠的書評！雖然是因為字數比較少的原因生存下來，但也是非常感動！

因為是第一是寫小說，還是挑戰第一人稱視角，第一人稱視角真的很難寫，很多時候還想要描述一下情境或是內心的感受，但因為視角的關係受到很多限制。

時間線也是另一個挑戰，看完倉鼠給的評論，我也決定要從新看一遍目前的章節，然後再做細修，還有去學習一下別人的文筆，因為我覺得自己的形容手法都差不多，看久了很重複的感覺。

感謝倉鼠開了這個創作挑戰，第一次收到別人的書評好緊張，謝謝倉鼠！辛苦你了～
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