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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
單從這兩回來看，其實作者比較適合第三人稱的手法。

現在用第一人稱，感覺不夠深入，但從作者的風格似乎不太喜歡直白的描述。所以我才覺得用則寫可能會更發揮到作者的能力，但是否真的適合大眾就不得而知。
5 years agoReply
P名
我就當是稱讚收下了🙈(厚臉皮)
功力青澀，還需多多鞭鞭策XD
5 years agoReply
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