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飄呀飄的羽毛
我也看過picky blinders，但只看了第一季，第二季只追了不到一半～

書評寫得太仔細了，厲害👍
7 hours agoReply
舒桐
謝謝！～～
55 minutes agoReply
新世紀鍵盤戰士
依舊高質素書評 跪了
1 week agoReply
半天藍
呵呵，很想要吧？（笑）
1 week agoReply
新世紀鍵盤戰士
@半天藍,......
1 week agoReply
舒桐
@新世紀鍵盤戰士,也只是略盡棉薄之力啦，有些地方其實我也沒能想得很清楚，感謝支持！
1 week agoReply
路易
謝謝書評，確實這個作品是偏「想到什麼寫什麼」的風格，的確各部分都需要加深加廣，之後需再改進。
我想這樣也比較能吸引讀者看到後面的結局。
再次感謝評論者辛苦閱讀寫評論。
2 weeks agoReply
舒桐
不會～只是一些個人意見，希望能為你的創作路上提供一些參考，加油加油！
2 weeks agoReply
舒桐
嗨 @路易～書評已經寫好囉，希望對你有幫助！
2 weeks agoReply
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