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林谷龍
石頭成長訊速，日復一日的訓練下，已磨礪成狼一樣的兇狠了。
4 months agoReply
林墨
石頭是北府軍的縮影。那是一群對北方有深仇大恨的流民，好好訓練就是一支勁旅。
4 months agoReply
原子能
一邊是北府軍的崛起，充滿了復仇的希望；一邊是主角深入敵營，忍辱負重。這雙線敘事太有張力了！感覺就像在下一盤大棋，兩邊都在積蓄力量，就等決戰了！
8 months agoReply
林墨
你看好快😆
歷史上的北府軍是戰力天花板，我覺得要重點描述一下才行，而不是直接寫他們徵兵、練兵、準備打仗。
8 months agoReply
原子能
@林墨,先快掃一次，再看第二次，這樣不僅可以看的快，也比較能進入情節，也能很快想到要留什麼話。給你參考，不過也是要練習，我一開始也很慢，現在快了一些。
8 months agoReply
林墨
@原子能,好喔，你一定常常速讀，這招學起來。
8 months agoReply
耀西係一隻龜
苻堅以為得了兩個人才，實則撿了兩個定時炸彈www
10 months agoReply
林墨
歷史上朱序是真的假降苻堅，慴伏了五年。
10 months agoReply
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