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世水
風格有轉型，越來越有戰爭策略作的味道www
1 year agoReply
皇王
這也是為了之後先寫看看～
1 year agoReply
世水
@皇王,可以多一些上下級指揮細節，或是陣型變換搭配武器擺陣會更有氣勢！
1 year agoReply
皇王
@世水,沒有武器，然後我要在三篇內寫完。
屬於實在是難為我一個新手作家了wwww
1 year agoReply
世水
@皇王,在魔法啪啪走的世道，除了魔法杖其它武器等於沒有😆
1 year agoReply
世水
太限字數，大場面被框住可惜阿～
1 year agoReply
皇王
@世水,這玩意我可以寫二十章；）
1 year agoReply
皇王
@世水,連法杖都不用囉www
1 year agoReply
世水
@皇王,寫啊，為了伊莉娜這美角值得吧😎✌️
1 year agoReply
皇王
@世水,之後遇到再寫啦，不然讀者忘了愛麗絲在幹嘛www
1 year agoReply
亞爾斯特2號
戰鬥結束，不知道之後會不會有更糟糕的戰鬥等待他們?
1 year agoReply
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