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藍傑沙
你的建議很好,非常感謝你的提點
7 years agoReply
應雨靜
通篇都很是精彩，有一種很好的臨場感。

我在想這句「耀，走開啊！」，如改成「耀，走開！」會不會更表現出一種短促，千鈞一髮的感覺。
7 years agoReply
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