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十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
是故事的承接問題？就像華麗登場後，需要那個人物可以吸引讀者看下去，同時間滲入故事世界觀及資訊，到某個章節要來下一個衝擊。
4 years agoReply
P名
是，雖然那個章節要等許久XD
4 years agoReply
十三郎(多媒體廢作人)
@P名,

明白，因為我也是這樣~
所以都會想反思一下自己寫故事的節奏~
4 years agoReply
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