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麻黃
(眨眨眼睛)因為不知道是什麼故事的同人而感覺好奇。
感覺是未完的故事，甜份倒是覺得還好(?)，感覺要等待小女孩適應了之後才會有甜甜的事件發生！
感覺後面好像還有啊，特別望眼欲穿啊wwwww
7 years agoReply
這篇同人的後續我是貼在其他地方的，只是剛好有適合的創挑，所以才試著來參加看看。
7 years agoReply
麻黃
@小瓦, 嚶好想知道後續喔，根據創挑的邏輯是甜文結局是兩人會分開？
7 years agoReply
@麻黃,在一起。
7 years agoReply
麻黃
@小瓦, （眨）醫生果然還是......
7 years agoReply
@麻黃,因為我是盡可能照著原作來寫的，所以...
7 years agoReply
麻黃
@小瓦, 那果然好像不能放上來，不然就是犯罪的故事了w
覺得小瓦敘事滿強的，有點日本文學的翻譯風的感覺（純粹個人感受（褒獎意思
7 years agoReply
@麻黃,然後被人嫌寫太長。(怪我嘍？)
7 years agoReply
Because
欲罷不能
7 years agoReply
蘿莉控？
7 years agoReply
Because
@小瓦,雜食怪！
7 years agoReply
@Because ,其實我還挺挑食的。
7 years agoReply
Because
@小瓦, 饕餮……吃吃吃，我什麼都吃的。
7 years agoReply
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