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我家的倉鼠會後空翻哦
@雪晴
1 month agoReply
雪晴
謝謝倉鼠大大，雪晴好好消化的。感謝大大在這情況下還把頭三章看完了💕
1 month agoReply
我家的倉鼠會後空翻哦
@雪晴,不客氣，簡化總結就是：
閱讀體驗並不糟糕，就是有點懸浮感，讀起來彆扭出戲，有些地方可以刻畫得更深
1 month agoReply
雪晴
@我家的倉鼠會後空翻哦, 我明白的， 這可能牽涉一點能力的問題了， 寫作經驗太少， 有些地方就含糊帶過就算了，希望未來能夠更加好的進步。
還是感謝大大的意見🙆
不過其實200萬是韓元，所以看起來那個對比會過份大了些。
1 month agoReply
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