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皮皮
喔喔喔喔!拿到我好意外的分數w
我承認前期因為我在合理化動機，所以有拖稿的情形w
但寫到昭月那邊，大概已經有想法了，我本人本來就喜歡虐人ouo
真的是意外之喜，謝謝菜根一口氣閱讀了這麼多哈哈哈!感謝意見，我會好好打磨的!
5 months agoReply
菜根
大讚，昭月我婆！(被打死)
5 months agoReply
子不語
我覺得幼兒智障歌很好，因為小孩大了就會改聽吵得要死的幼兒洗腦歌，例如baby shark⋯⋯那個更吵，而且會卡在腦袋裡面出不來。 😂
5 months agoReply
菜根
智障洗腦歌......太太說這樣學英文才會快。比黃漫黏在腦中的時間還要久！太可怕了！
5 months agoReply
菜根
@皮皮, 應該讀了有五萬字了？沒有BL致命傷~所以算是不錯了@@
5 months agoReply
皮皮
感謝菜根大的肯定w關於敘述太長，上次請曉潔看也有提到w我會記下來，找個時間改趕修一修

然後菜根大說的那種硬湊，我可以理解w
就是a與b的感情都還沒有成立，就忽然一見鍾情，沒有任何鋪墊和轉折還有交代，為何他會喜歡上他?甚至是在兩人的腳色曲線都沒有豐富呈現的情況下w(當然如果是寫車文就不一樣了哈哈哈)

也很感謝你給出的肯定!辛苦了!不著急看完，有時間可以翻閱指點一二就好了!謝謝!
5 months agoReply
菜根
@皮皮, 沒錯(｡ŏ﹏ŏ)
5 months agoReply
菜根
@皮皮,今天的份啃完了~
5 months agoReply
菜根
@皮皮,1/29 軟趴菜根流~結束0.0
5 months agoReply
皮皮
不換，就說是抖m了，然後這是正經版的，不會像言情放心ouo
5 months agoReply
菜根
好的~已受理。(看來要使用斬后刀了~)
5 months agoReply
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