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熊兒 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 33!
非常感謝讀者心得！正如妳先前所說，妳的心得很溫柔(´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)~~~

對於各事件、各厲鬼的人生故事要揭露到什麼程度，我真的煩惱很久(還失眠)。

理想上希望能帶入更多議題，但在有主線與支線並進的情況下，若厲鬼身世著墨太多，我火侯還不足，可能寫成定位不明的故事Q_Q所以這部分，確實刻意刪減了一些情感與因果。

不過我後續修稿時會再多多考量，看是否有空間補足，但不會模糊主要篇章！再次謝謝小豬！(*^▽^*)
6 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
這是小小意見，文已經很好，節奏適中，作為愛情小說的定位，你已寫得很優質呀！
6 months agoReply
熊兒
@小豬瑩瑩, 嗚嗚感動，謝謝小豬的肯定 ヾ(´︶`*)ﾉ♬
6 months agoReply
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