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陽壽木魚
心得：

看到最新進度#10

以作者的年紀算是寫的很不錯了，反觀國一左右的我還只會寫異世界開掛廁紙⋯

劇情感覺上是滿穩的，但是感覺鋪陳有點少，還有篇幅太短了。

作者繼續加油啊！
9 months agoReply
思靜
謝謝大大
9 months agoReply
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