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黑大拿
我的作品就是TRPG團錄改編XD
有大量對白的好處就是能用對話來推進劇情和讀者認知，我自己寫起來是滿順的啦
至於在團錄的一些小動作我就是當伏筆去用了，如果會有看起來不簡潔的問題，我會覺得可能是這裡塞太多暗線情報，就會把一些稍作整合，當作一種取捨（？
4 years agoReply
有時候很難取捨啊，所以我總是要一直回去重看自己寫的東西修修改改TT不過有時候有沒有寫出那個小動作感覺真的不太一樣⋯⋯畢竟對串很習慣要用別人的小動作變化去猜測對方的行動或想法等等，閱讀起來整個會差很多，不過對一般讀者來說，好像又不夠簡潔⋯⋯
4 years agoReply
黑大拿
@葉悠慕, 我倒覺得還好？這還能算是作品特色的範疇啦XD
反而比較對這種有很多綿綿密密動作的作品比較感興趣，能深度挖掘其中內涵~
如果覺得不夠簡潔，那就只能嘗試再多把這些小動作寫得更融會貫通了，至少我是支持繼續寫小動作（？）的！
4 years agoReply
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