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艾米莉
感謝各位的意見　^Ｕ^
這是我第一次挑戰的題材，也不知道拿捏得好不好。
我很喜歡夏目友人帳，所以也想寫一個類似氛圍的故事。
關於敘事跳躍、打斷情緒、人設矛盾的問題，我自己是沒有發覺，看來要回去多讀幾遍，非常感謝大家！
8 months agoReply
不眠草
果然是夏目友人帳阿(ﾉ>ω<)ﾉ 艾米莉加油
8 months agoReply
艾米莉
@不眠草,謝謝！衝啊～～
8 months agoReply
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