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子不語
看完目前的回合，沒看番外。

老實說，沒辦法評論角色，因為迪蘭的個性還在扁平人物的階段，就是個陰謀背景板，十足十的功利主義者。但是故事裡面絕大多數都是在講男女主角第一次相遇的故事，他只有扮演推動故事的角色，還有對女兒的思想絕對控制。但是這裡提供的近萬字設定稿，也沒有弄出更多深層次的性格。

還是建議先將迪蘭的線擴展更多之後，才有辦法賞析這個角色。
22 hours agoReply
亨達
好 我趕快趕進度弄死他

那些亂七八造的後日談不用看
21 hours agoReply
Devor 白棘
好長⋯⋯
1 day agoReply
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