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熊兒 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 31!
一口氣追完啦！😍😍😍妳的文筆跟故事還是這麼讚！

雖然篇幅不長，但我覺得李霆禦的心靈成長軌跡很鮮明，看到他後悔沒有在江妍需要他時守在她身邊的橋段，成功讓我難過到有點胃痛😂😆…雖然江妍決定重新接受他的收尾我個人覺得有一點點點倉促，但也有可能是我一口氣看完，情緒還來不及轉換的緣故。 

期待之後的作品🥹😍❤️下個故事見！
1 year agoReply
韶華雅鏡
首先感謝打賞和排山倒海而來的喜歡😆
這個故事本來設定就不太長，也曾擔心你說的那些問題......因為前期糖灑得好像有點太多。後面就有點卡卡，感覺再走一次類似模式有點太騙文，又想不到更好的鋪設，所以就照原訂計畫在30章內結束了。
看來真的會覺得太快了，謝謝你讓我知道讀者的感受🥹
再次謝謝支持和留言🥰期待在未來的故事相見囉🫰🏻❤️
1 year agoReply
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