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世水
樸實簡單的拳腳👊🦶切磋，看的挺賞心悅目🥰
由於特效技能（？）不多，因此動作描寫會更加側重，細節更為豐富。挺好👍
1 year agoReply
夢語
剛開始都只能這樣，後面場面實力提升，感覺就會開始華麗大場面。
不過描寫感覺會難很多，畢竟能量衝擊的特效沒什麼好講的......
1 year agoReply
世水
@夢語,現在是看滿賞心悅目的～ 主要是看似普通的拳腳相交，越是貼近現實的動作。至於大招……比較像神話😅 共鳴感會弱化些 ：） 別戰力崩壞就行: D

能量招看看從技能外觀、肢體施展動作來描寫？
1 year agoReply
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