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W.H.
進步真快，很厲害！！「出生於太平洋的熱帶海面上，還未彌月」這兩句，以新生兒和颱風做連結，詩味比較濃了～

這才你寫的第三首新詩呢！

詩，寫自己有感觸的，會比較快，也比較好，寫了一陣子後，再寫距離更遠，更概念化的題材，會比較好掌握。

要不要寫假日只能用一小時手機的無奈？

應該會很有趣！

(你爸媽不會看 Pnn 吧？)
2 years agoReply
李誠金
有趣嗎？但我爸媽不會看pnn
2 years agoReply
W.H.
@李誠金,我覺得你應該會有很多話想說⋯⋯就寫成新詩吧！
2 years agoReply
章魚燒醬
好像很久都沒放颱風假了（北部）不過暑假放颱風假反而會傷心(￣▽￣)
2 years agoReply
李誠金
是啊,颱風假想放不放,不想放卻放了,這下成了4天連價
2 years agoReply
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