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霧飄山亭
真的！《更漏子》這詞牌本身的格律便很有韻味(很多連3句)，加上大大你這篇用了頂真與複字等手法，讀來真的十分連綿！
但自己不太喜歡《更漏子》的換韻…XD

話說…我那首《江城子》是否要重新評(緊張(>﹏<))還是不用了？
7 years agoReply
零兒
我在成果公布應該會再評....這不是在說你一定會得名，在這裡澄清一下owo
7 years agoReply
霧飄山亭
@零兒,喔！感謝回答！辛苦了(也沒想過要得名啦XD)
7 years agoReply
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