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黑靈
哈哈，謝謝小魚的心得～
因為這部夢不是以打鬥為主要，所以打鬥劇情不多🤣就是輕鬆看木頭高和，鬼火布耳和吸血鬼貝娜三主角的相處。我寫的作品都是文筆普通，請勿介意我的文筆🤣🤣

因為知道自己的文筆普通，所以我的作品都是以劇情為主要🤭🤣🤣

那個「 驚嚇暈 」其實是受驚，嚇暈🤣🤣我少打了個標點符號～

再次感謝你花時間看了這部～❤️
5 months agoReply
小魚一尾
不會XD其實我也在練習心得寫作的方式

學校詩選老師：小朋友你要交給我的心得作業是不是還沒有交呢～
5 months agoReply
小魚一尾
@黑靈
5 months agoReply
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