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對酒當歌
真的感謝大大的心得，我回讀的時候總是覺得卡卡的
終於找到問題所在~
四字詩方面我正努力練習，到數十章後應該有少許改善~XD
字數方面我還未有概念，因為是第一次寫小說，還是超長篇，只好寫到哪算到哪XD
如果大大有空歡迎隨時對之後的篇章提提意見~~感激不盡~~
6 months agoReply
潮先生
大大，能不能也看一看我寫的《復臨刻》🥹🥹，希望您能給我一個書評。👉👈因為我是新人。
只要願意看，我就很感恩了🙏。
6 months agoReply
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